Press Release Mistakes Killing Your Marketing ROI

Crafting compelling press releases is essential for effective marketing and getting your message heard. But are you making common mistakes that are burying your news instead of boosting it?

Key Takeaways

  • Always include a direct, trackable link in your press release to gauge its impact; generic website links won’t cut it.
  • Target your press release distribution list meticulously using tools like Prowly or Meltwater, ensuring relevance and maximizing potential media coverage.
  • Quantify your press release’s success with metrics like website traffic, social media mentions, and sales leads generated within the first week of distribution.

## 1. Forgetting the “So What?” Factor

Far too many press releases launch into product features or company history without answering the most important question: Why should anyone care? Before you even start writing, define the core news value of your announcement. Is it a groundbreaking innovation? Does it solve a pressing problem? Does it have a significant impact on the local community?

Pro Tip: Imagine you’re explaining the news to a friend. If you can’t get them excited in a sentence or two, your press release needs a serious overhaul.

We had a client last year – a small bakery in Decatur, Georgia – who wanted to announce a new flavor of cupcake. Sounds boring, right? Instead of focusing on the flavor itself, we framed the release around their partnership with a local charity, donating a portion of the proceeds from each cupcake sold. This turned a simple product announcement into a story about community support, grabbing the attention of local news outlets.

## 2. Neglecting the Headline

Your headline is the first (and sometimes only) thing people will see. It needs to be concise, attention-grabbing, and accurately reflect the content of your release. Avoid vague or overly clever headlines that leave readers guessing. Instead, focus on clarity and impact.

Common Mistake: Using all caps in your headline. It looks spammy and unprofessional.

Think of your headline as a mini-news story. It should include the most important information and entice readers to learn more. A good example? Instead of “Acme Corp Announces New Product,” try “Acme Corp Launches AI-Powered Tool to Cut Marketing Costs for Small Businesses.”

## 3. Burying the Lead

The first paragraph of your press release is crucial. It needs to immediately establish the who, what, when, where, and why of your announcement. Don’t save the most important information for later. Get straight to the point and capture the reader’s attention from the start.

Pro Tip: Use the inverted pyramid approach. Start with the most newsworthy information and then provide supporting details in descending order of importance.

## 4. Ignoring SEO

While press releases are primarily intended for journalists and media outlets, they can also contribute to your overall overall SEO strategy. Optimize your release with relevant keywords, but do so naturally. Don’t stuff your release with keywords to the point where it becomes unreadable.

Common Mistake: Forgetting to include internal links to relevant pages on your website. This can help drive traffic and improve your search engine rankings.

Use tools like Semrush or Ahrefs to identify relevant keywords with decent search volume and incorporate them strategically throughout your release. For example, if you’re announcing a new software product for the real estate industry, you might target keywords like “real estate CRM,” “property management software,” or “lead generation for realtors.”

## 5. Forgetting Contact Information

This seems obvious, but you’d be surprised how many press releases fail to include clear and accurate contact information. Make it easy for journalists to reach you with questions or requests for interviews. Include a name, title, email address, and phone number.

Pro Tip: Designate a specific person to handle media inquiries and ensure they’re prepared to respond promptly and professionally.

## 6. Distributing to the Wrong People

Sending your press release to a generic media list is a waste of time and resources. Take the time to research and identify journalists and media outlets that specifically cover your industry or target audience. Use tools like Prowly or Meltwater to build targeted media lists.

Common Mistake: Sending mass emails to journalists with no personalization. This is a surefire way to get your release ignored.

We ran into this exact issue at my previous firm. We were promoting a new electric vehicle charging station being installed near the intersection of North Druid Hills Road and Briarcliff Road in Atlanta. We initially sent a generic press release to a broad list of media contacts. The results? Minimal coverage. After refining our list to focus on local Atlanta news outlets and journalists who specifically cover transportation and sustainability, we saw a significant increase in media pickup.

## 7. Lack of a Trackable Link

A press release without a clear call to action and a trackable link is a missed opportunity. Don’t just link to your homepage. Direct readers to a specific landing page related to the news. This allows you to measure the effectiveness of your release and track conversions.

Pro Tip: Use a URL shortener like Bitly or Rebrandly to create a custom, trackable link.

I had a client last year who launched a new line of organic baby food. We included a trackable link in the press release that led to a dedicated landing page with a special offer for new customers. Within the first week, we saw a 20% increase in website traffic and a significant boost in sales of the new product line.

## 8. Ignoring Visuals

In today’s visually driven world, a press release without images or videos is likely to be overlooked. Include high-quality visuals that enhance your story and capture the attention of journalists and readers. Consider how media exposure can turn buzz into revenue by grabbing attention.

Common Mistake: Using low-resolution images or irrelevant stock photos.

Consider including a product shot, a company logo, or a short video clip. According to a report by the IAB (Interactive Advertising Bureau) [IAB](https://iab.com/insights/), visual content is 43% more effective at persuading consumers than text-only content.

## 9. Overusing Jargon and Buzzwords

Avoid using industry jargon or buzzwords that are meaningless to the average reader. Write in clear, concise language that everyone can understand. Remember, your goal is to communicate effectively, not to impress people with your vocabulary.

Pro Tip: Read your press release aloud to identify any awkward phrasing or jargon.

## 10. Not Following Up

Don’t just send your press release and hope for the best. Follow up with key journalists and media outlets to see if they have any questions or need additional information. A polite and persistent follow-up can make all the difference.

Common Mistake: Being too aggressive or demanding in your follow-up. Be respectful of journalists’ time and deadlines.

## 11. Ignoring Data and Metrics

How will you measure the success of your press release? Define your key performance indicators (KPIs) upfront and track your results. This will help you identify what’s working and what’s not, so you can improve your strategy over time. Consider using AI writers to help with content.

Pro Tip: Track metrics like website traffic, social media mentions, and media coverage.

## 12. Forgetting the Local Angle

If your announcement has a local impact, be sure to highlight it in your press release. Local news outlets are always looking for stories that are relevant to their community. Mention specific locations, businesses, or organizations in your area. For example, if you’re opening a new office in Sandy Springs, mention the specific address and any local partnerships you’ve formed.

Common Mistake: Failing to tailor your press release to the specific interests of local media outlets.

If your business is involved in a legal matter, and your press release relates to a case in the Fulton County Superior Court, reference the specific case number. If it involves workers’ compensation, mention the State Board of Workers’ Compensation.

## 13. Prematurely Announcing Information

One of the biggest mistakes I see is companies jumping the gun and releasing information before it’s fully baked. A good rule of thumb is to make sure all your ducks are in a row. If you’re announcing a new partnership, confirm that all contracts are finalized. If you’re launching a new product, ensure it’s readily available for purchase. Releasing half-baked news can damage your credibility and lead to negative press. You might also find talent using interviews to unlock talent.

Pro Tip: Create a detailed timeline before drafting your press release. This will help you stay on track and avoid premature announcements.

Crafting compelling press releases is both an art and a science. By avoiding these common mistakes and focusing on clear communication, targeted distribution, and measurable results, you can significantly increase your chances of getting your message heard. Now, go forth and make some news!

How long should a press release be?

Ideally, a press release should be between 400 and 500 words. This provides enough space to convey the key information without overwhelming journalists or readers.

What’s the best time of day to send a press release?

The best time to send a press release is typically in the morning, between 9:00 AM and 11:00 AM Eastern Time. This gives journalists ample time to review the release and potentially follow up before their deadlines.

Should I include quotes in my press release?

Yes, including quotes from key stakeholders can add credibility and personality to your press release. Quotes should be relevant, insightful, and contribute to the overall narrative.

What is a media kit, and should I include one?

A media kit is a collection of materials that provide journalists with additional information about your company or announcement. It typically includes things like a company fact sheet, executive bios, high-resolution images, and videos. Including a media kit can make it easier for journalists to write about your news.

How do I measure the success of my press release?

You can measure the success of your press release by tracking metrics like website traffic, social media mentions, media coverage, and sales leads generated. Use tools like Google Analytics and social media monitoring platforms to track these metrics.

Stop treating press releases as an afterthought. Think of them as a targeted, strategic marketing tool that, when executed correctly, can deliver real results. Focus on crafting a compelling narrative, distributing to the right audience, and tracking your results and you’ll see a significant return on your investment.

Marcus Davenport

Senior Director of Brand Innovation Certified Marketing Management Professional (CMMP)

Marcus Davenport is a seasoned Marketing Strategist with over a decade of experience driving growth for leading organizations. He currently serves as the Senior Director of Brand Innovation at Stellar Marketing Solutions, where he spearheads the development and execution of integrated marketing campaigns. Prior to Stellar, Marcus held key leadership roles at Apex Digital Group. He is a recognized expert in digital marketing, brand strategy, and customer engagement, consistently delivering measurable results for his clients. Notably, Marcus led the team that achieved a 300% increase in lead generation for Stellar Marketing Solutions' flagship product in Q4 2022.